Originally Posted by Pmb

Singularitarian - I'm going to bow out of this conversation. To me it appears that you're attempting to dabble in quantum gravity. Since
I have yet to study quantum gravity yet I choose not to attempt to decipher someone's attempt at some sort of equation. If you want help all you have to do is to go to the physics newsgroup

sci.physics.research

and post the link to your derivation there. There is someone who posts there who is an expert, i.e. John Baez, who I may want to read your post. Warning - When you go to the internet and ask someone to review your work then it will be very hard to get help if it's a long derivation with no documentation.